Songwriting Project

Follow along with me as I work my way through this new song

A few months after my dad passed away I kept catching glimpses of him.
Just on the periphery—out of the corner of my eye.

But it was always just me. An awkward or unexpected reflection of myself, caught in the right light. And hell, I looked just like him. Even a little old now, like he always was.

It struck me, and it happened enough that I wrote about it. And then forgot about it until I found this little phone recording last night.

This recording is a pretty good example of where things start for me when writing a song.

But a lot of stuff never goes beyond that point. I’ve decided I’ll move ahead with this one—for a bunch of reasons. Below are the lyrics I had at this point. Check out future posts where I’ll discuss some of those reasons.

Country Tune Fragment (work in progress)

I saw you in the mirror this morning
out of the corner of my eye
I didn't stop to think that you were long gone
I figured maybe you had just dropped by

And when I turned to see it wasn’t you it was just me
Those eyes I saw weren’t yours, they were mine

You gave me these eyes, this heart, this worried and this troubled mind
You showed me how to walk and how to walk the line

You taught me an answer’s just another question, given enough time
So Daddy, why'd you leave the old world behind?

—Ultimate Rick Jones (Jan. 2023)